Second Draft

Here is the second draft of my magazine. I have started to replace the shapes with actual images and texts, however, I feel it still looks too basic and is not of a professional standard. I would like to change the front cover and take away some sell lines as I feel it looks too busy, even for a pop magazine. I'd also like to add more images as I know alot of Pop Magazines include alot of images on their front cover.
Secondly, I'd like to change the layout of my contents page as it does not leave enough room for my contents and I have only been able to write about 30/40 pages of content.