Audience Feedback for Magazine Draft

Processes of Construction

Here is the evidence of my processes whilst editing my photos for my magazine. I used a range of techniques in Photoshop, demonstrated in the SlideShows below.

Processes for first draft from GeorgiaLeaper

Second Draft

Here is the second draft of my magazine. I have started to replace the shapes with actual images and texts, however, I feel it still looks too basic and is not of a professional standard. I would like to change the front cover and take away some sell lines as I feel it looks too busy, even for a pop magazine. I'd also like to add more images as I know alot of Pop Magazines include alot of images on their front cover.
Secondly, I'd like to change the layout of my contents page as it does not leave enough room for my contents and I have only been able to write about 30/40 pages of content.

Magazine first draft

Here is a very basic outline of the layout I will use in my magazine. I have used shapes so show where images and text boxes will go, which will make it easier when it comes to constructing my magazine.

First sketches

These are a very rough sketch of my first ideas for my layout which I decided to think about before beginning to construct my magazine.